Labyrinths Of Soul
[/img]http://www.pixiport.com/art_photographer_joseph_gerges_/base0.html "The illiterate of the future will not be the man who cannot read the alphabet, but the one who cannot take a photograph. But...
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lovely sentiments here, nia.would you consider taking the word "love" out of the poem entirely? You use the word a lot, and I think you imply it with others. Best with this,laur
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Laur,First of all thank you for your reading and reply. Of course it can be some difference between languages and related with cultures. I don't know, you know Rumi or Omer Khayyam... "Love" is great...
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I made something about its shape some breaks between lines, and punctua.s... does it make better for a lot "love"...thanks. with my love,Nia
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Hello nia. Just a few thoughts on your poem. I see that this is not in your first language and I admire your courage in what you are doing.Labyrinths Of Soul To write is my freedom in the blueness of...
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Joshua Barn,First of all I wnat to say, your words are so appreciated for me too, and thank you for this. It is always nice to have comments from readers, maybe we write a poem, but more than this,...
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Nia, thanks for your extended reply to my crit. I understand your poem much better now. I know that poems are often presented with photographs, music, color, and generally as a piece of art. It is...
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Nia, thanks for your extended reply to my crit. I understand your poem much better now. I know that poems are often presented with photographs, music, color, and generally as a piece of art. It is...
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Hi Nia,To write is my freedom in the blueness of birds... standing there
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"This is really abstract. Learn your cliches and their significance to poetry to why you shouldn't use them. Learn your past, present, and future tenses and how to apply them correctly."Andrew,First...
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Quote:This is your and laur opinionsNo Nia, I speak the truth, which is different from opinion.~Dickinson~
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Nia io have not read your explanationbecause I wanted to give you my first impression of your words. From my life experience I know deeply the truth of your words. The necessity of love can not be...
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"No Nia, I speak the truth, which is different from opinion."~Dickinson~ I respect your truth; but again this is your truth...What is the truth of a poem / or poetry....Poem is a kind of langauge...
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Rhiannon,I am so glad to hear someone who understands and feels my poem, Thank you, it was my feelings that I wrote; and it is so nice to share with you and to give something to you... what can I...
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My cliche expressions are my feelings and my thoughts.What I felt I wrote. I didnt sit my desk for to write a poem; I wrote in my mind/heart, then I came to write... Saying that they are cliche, means...
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